Your 'project' is just as magnificent up to chapter 11. I really didn't have any commentaries this time -- the text is already well-corrected -- nothing much aside a simmering sense of outrage at the years and years of neglect regarding your health, your developing person. I'm very sorry, and that's nothing to do with pity. I thought you might want to know the effect of your words, though I'm not a disinterested reader. I think that if I were, the effect would be the same.
Escolar aka Walu
9 years ago