Editing. On page 40 of 269. It's been fairly chill thus far, and everyone who's read and commented gave me things to consider.

The good news is that it should -- I hope -- get even easier as I go along. The writing gets better, I think, a relaxing into the story, voice, and pace. I almost certainly won't be done editing by the time I go to Kimmel Harding, but I hope to finish by the time I leave for MacDowell in late August.